STRAIN
The E.R. seemed quiet
a ruined man coughing up ghosts
sneezing lies of what home should be
an overweight woman bleeding from her soul,
condescending son lamenting his late night
and they avoid my gaze (well they should)
for my pain would serve only to break them.
Pretty nurse takes pulse, pressure
eyes sparkling as they meet my own
“Sir, this may hurt a bit” (needle penetrates my joint).
I laugh, make one thing clear:
“Never me.”
The E.R. seemed quiet
now the pretty nurse choked on ghosts
wheezing breaths where life should be
if only she had looked away.
© Copyright 2013 Joseph A. Pinto. All Rights Reserved.
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Three words: thoughtful, hard, painful.
Wonderful peace Joseph.
Thank you very much, Chris! I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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STRAIN by Joseph Pinto
Thanks for the reblog, Jon!
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Thank you for reblogging this, Chris!
Glad to. It’s perfect. I tried to comment on the post but WP is being a *&^% at the moment! This one was freakin awesome. I believe I will be seeing this scene in my head for the rest of the day.
Hey Chris! Yes, WP often acts up at times – such a petulant child! lol I’m glad you enjoyed ‘STRAIN.’ Inspired, as you might gather, from an actual trip to the ER over a year ago. Nothing is safe when I watch it… lol
Joe – The ER always invokes a story when I go. Sadly enough, that is far too often these days lol. Ill post a few of my ER tales eventually.
So much said with so little words! Loved this, Joe, very well done!
Thank you very much, Tyr! 🙂
Came across your blog! I love your work. Poor nurse choked on ghosts! Auch!
Hi Sherrie! Thank you very much, that’s very kind of you to say 🙂 I hope you stick around awhile 😉
For sure I will. 🙂
Well done. ER eerire
Thank you very much, sir 🙂